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И, сдается мне, ошибки в английском все же имеют место быть.

FIRST_NAME FAMILY_NAME

email: xxxxxx@xxxxxx.xx
mobile: +7(xxx)xxx-xxxx

Oracle Certified Professional Database Administrator with 8+ years of experience

OBJECTIVE
Full time position as Oracle Database Administrator/Systems Engineer

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
- More than 8 years of experience in Oracle RDBMS;
- Sr. Oracle DBA / Technical Consultant in more than 10 large successful projects for local and international customers from different industries (banking, telecom, oil, insurance, industry, government etc);
- Oracle first-line technical support and troubleshooting for customer's DBAs;
- Experienced with very big OLTP and Data Warehouse databases with up to 8 terabytes in size;
- Expert in managing Oracle Databases in 24x7 mission-critical production environment on Unix platforms (HP-UX, Solaris, AIX, Linux);
- Extensive experience in overall system Performance Tuning;
- Highly skilled in High Availability and Backup/Recovery;
- Experienced in a pre-sales/technical consulting role;
- Familiar with MS SQL Server and Sybase ASE administration;

SKILLS

RDBMS: ORACLE 7/8/8i/9i/10G/11G, Sybase ASE 11, MS SQL Server 7/2000/2005
ORACLE TOOLS: SQL*Plus, Import/Export/DataPump, Enterprise Manager, RMAN, Statspack/AWR, Standby (DataGuard), RAC
OPERATING SYSTEMS: HP-UX, Sun Solaris, IBM AIX, RH/SuSE Linux, Windows XP/NT/2000
HARDWARE: HP 9000 Series, Sun E20K, IBM p-Series
BACKUP TOOLS: Veritas (Symantec) Netbackup, Legato (EMC) Networker, IBM Tivoli Data Protection
DIAGNOSTIC and PERFORMANCE TOOLS: Sun guds, IBM nmon
OTHER: Quest TOAD

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

xxx 200x - present xxxxxxxx название_компании xxxxxxxxxxxxx, Moscow, Russia
Sr. Oracle Systems Engineer / Principal Consultant

Largest projects:

x/200x – present xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Mission-critical administration and technical support of Oracle databases in head and branch offices throughout Russia.
Responsibilities:
- 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under HP-UX and Solaris environment;
- Multiple installations of Oracle database software on Unix servers;
- Multiple upgrades of Oracle production databases from 9i to 10g version (dbua scripts, exp/imp);
- Multiple database migrations to the new servers;
- Multiple Oracle patchsets and minipatches applying on production databases;
- Instance, application and OS performance problems resolving using Statspack/AWR, 10046/10053 events, tkprof, OS commands etc.
- Enhanced Oracle performance reports preparing for customers;
- Developed and implemented backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Veritas Netbackup;
- Standby databases creation;
- Participated in several HA Veritas Failover Cluster implementations;
- Worked closely with Oracle Support on bug identifying and fixing (using iTARs)
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

x/200x – present xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Mission-critical administration and technical support of Oracle databases.
Responsibilities:
- 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under Linux and Windows environment;
- Multiple installations of Oracle database software;
- Multiple upgrades of Oracle production databases from 8i to 9i version;
- Multiple database migrations to the new servers and/or disk arrays;
- Oracle patchsets and minipatches applying on production databases;
- Instance, application and OS performance problems resolving using Statspack, 10046 event, tkprof, OS commands etc.
- Database cloning using RMAN;
- Installed and configured Real Application Clusters (RAC) for Oracle 9i/10g databases;
- Developed and implemented backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Veritas Netbackup;
- Worked closely with Oracle Support on bug identifying and fixing (using iTARs)
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

x/200x – present xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Mission-critical administration and technical support of Oracle databases.
Responsibilities:
- 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under Solaris environment;
- Multiple installations of Oracle database software;
- Multiple upgrades of Oracle production databases from 9i to 10g version (dbua scripts);
- Multiple database migrations to the new servers and/or disk arrays;
- Oracle patchsets and minipatches applying on production databases;
- Instance, application and OS performance problems resolving using Statspack/AWR, 10046 event, tkprof, OS commands etc.
- Enhanced Oracle performance reports writing;
- Developed and implemented backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Legato (EMC) Networker;
- Standby databases creation;
- Worked closely with Oracle Support on bug identifying and fixing (using iTARs)
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

x/200x – x/200x xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Administration and technical support of Oracle databases.
Responsibilities:
- 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under Solaris and Linux environment;
- Installed Oracle database software;
- Applied Oracle patchsets and minipatches on production databases;
- Set up a standby database for high availability;
- Migrated production database from RH Linux to Solaris environment;
- Developed and implemented of backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Tivoli Data Protection;
- Resolved instance, application and OS performance problems using Statspack/AWR, 10046 event, tkprof, OS commands etc.
- Prepared the enhanced Oracle performance reports for customers;
- Worked closely with Oracle Support on bug identifying and fixing (using iTARs)
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

............ и еще пара проджектов, подобных вышеописанным .............

xxx 199x - xxx 200x xxxxxxxx название_компании xxxxxxxxxxxxx, Moscow, Russia
Oracle DBA / Lead QA Engineer
Responsibilities:

- Provided Oracle, Sybase and MS SQL Server support for multiple databases in development and test environments for various types of databases - OLTP and Datawarehouse.
- Responsible for Oracle, Sybase and MS SQL Server installations on UNIX (Solaris, Linux) and Windows servers.
- Performed DBA services, such as performance monitoring and tuning and daily database management.
Environment:
Oracle-ы, другие СУБД, ОСы, сервера, массивы

CERTIFICATION
- Oracle Database Administrator Certified Professional (2005)

TRAINING
- ORACLE 10g: New Features For Administrators (2006);
- ORACLE 9i Performance Tuning (2004);
- ORACLE 9i Database Administration Fundamentals I&II (2004);

EDUCATION
Bachelor of Science Degree – Moscow Technical University - Moscow, Russia, 2000.

PERSONAL
- Highly skilled in troubleshooting, problem analysis and solving within tight deadlines;
- Ability to work in team;
- Good communication skills with ability to "listen" to the customer;
- Doing the job perfectly usually exceeding customer's expectations

REFERENCES
available upon request

Многие вакансии включают в себя не только знание Оракла, но и других СУБД. Я написал про MS и Sybase, исходя из этого. А разве те проекты, которые все еще продолжаются не нужно писать в настоящем времени? Согласен. Но только этих всевозможных тюнингов было столько, что я никогда не вспомню и тем более не напишу на сколько процентов увеличилась производительность. Здесь имелось в виду написание красивых отчетов для заказчиков по работе и производительности БД и сервера. Эээ... а как если не секрет лучше написать тут? :)))

Вообще, я имел в виду банки А как правильно тогда следует охарактеризовывать самые крупные проекты? Да это я просто вам написал, что здесь будет информация об Ораклах и железках Разрешения нет

Внес некоторые поправки и немного несколько пафосной саморекламы с учетом замечаний :)
Посмотрите пож-та.

FIRST_NAME FAMILY_NAME

email: xxxxxx@xxxxxx.xx
mobile: +7(xxx)xxx-xxxx

Oracle Certified Professional Database Administrator with 8+ years of experience

OBJECTIVE
Full time position as Oracle Database Administrator within a successful company where I can apply my skills to contribute to the company's success while further developing my skills continuing to grow my career.

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
- More than 8 years of extensive experience in Oracle RDBMS;
- Sr. Oracle DBA in more than 10 large successful projects for local and international customers from different industries (banking, telecom, oil&gas, insurance services, public services);
- Oracle first-line technical support and troubleshooting for customer's DBAs;
- Experienced with big OLTP and Datawarehouse databases with up to 8 terabytes in size;
- Expert in managing Oracle Databases in 24x7 mission-critical production environment on Unix platforms (HP-UX, Solaris, AIX, Linux);
- Extensive experience in overall system Performance Tuning;
- Highly skilled in High Availability and Backup/Recovery;
- Experienced in a pre-sales/technical consulting role;
- Experienced in MS SQL Server and Sybase ASE administration;

SKILLS

RDBMS: ORACLE 7/8/8i/9i/10G/11G, Sybase ASE 11, MS SQL Server 7/2000/2005
ORACLE TOOLS: SQL*Plus, Import/Export/DataPump, Enterprise Manager, RMAN, Statspack/AWR, tkprof
HIGH AVAILABILITY: Standby (DataGuard), RAC
OPERATING SYSTEMS: HP-UX, Sun Solaris, IBM AIX, RH/SuSE Linux, Windows XP/NT/2000
HARDWARE: HP 9000 Series, Sun E20K, IBM p-Series
BACKUP TOOLS: Veritas (Symantec) Netbackup, Legato (EMC) Networker, IBM Tivoli Data Protection
DIAGNOSTIC and PERFORMANCE TOOLS: Sun guds, IBM nmon

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

200x - present COMPANY_NAME, Moscow, Russia
Sr. Oracle Systems Engineer / Principal Consultant

Projects:

200x – present CLIENT_NAME, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Administration and support of 20 mission critical Oracle databases in head and branch offices throughout Russia.
Responsibilities:
- Provided 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under HP-UX and Solaris environment for various types of databases (OLTP, DSS, mixed);
- Installed Oracle database software on Unix servers;
- Successfully upgraded Oracle production databases from 9i to 10g version;
- Migrated several production databases to the new servers;
- Applied Oracle patchsets and minipatches on production databases;
- Identified several areas in customer's key application that was causing excessive load on the database thereby hurting the performance. Implementing my recommendations, customer was able to reduce the load on the database by two thirds.
- Created enhanced Oracle/OS performance tuning reports for customers's DBAs to prevent performance degradation in future;
- Developed and implemented backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Veritas Netbackup;
- Implemented High Availability solutions (Standby Database, Veritas Failover Cluster);
- Cloned databases using RMAN for developer's requests;
- Successfully engaged with customers to help them to choose the optimum technology solutions;
- Resolved bugs with Oracle Support.
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

200x – present CLIENT_NAME, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Administration and support of 30 mission critical Oracle databases in head and branch offices throughout Russia.
Responsibilities:
- Provided 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under Linux and Windows environment;
- Installed Oracle database software;
- Successfully upgraded Oracle production databases from 8i to 9i version;
- Migrated several production databases to the new servers and/or disk arrays;
- Applied Oracle patchsets and minipatches on production databases;
- Resolved various instance, application and OS performance problems accelerating the overall system responce time up to 2 times;
- Efficiently tuned client queries. In particular, tuned a query that typically ran for 30 minutes down to 20 seconds.
- Successfully implemented an Oracle RAC environment using a three instance configuration in a RH Linux environment for Oracle 9i databases;
- Developed and implemented backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Veritas Netbackup;
- Successfully recovered several large databases from media failure as well as user error;
- Resolved bugs with Oracle Support.
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

200x – present CLIENT_NAME, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Administration and support of mission critical production, development and test Oracle databases.
Responsibilities:
- Provided 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under Solaris environment for various types of databases (OLTP, DSS);
- Installed Oracle database software;
- Successfully upgraded Oracle production databases from 9i to 10g version;
- Migrated several production databases to the new servers and/or disk arrays;
- Applied Oracle patchsets and minipatches on production, development and test databases;
- Resolved lots of various instance, application and OS performance problems;
- Created enhanced Oracle/OS performance tuning reports for customers's DBAs to prevent performance degradation in future;
- Redesigned customer's disaster recovery solution implementing Oracle Data Guard with following hot backup of Standby database using RMAN and Legato (EMC) Networker. This reduced the potential downtime from 1 day down to minutes.
- Successfully recovered large database from media failure;
- Resolved bugs with Oracle Support.
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

200x – present CLIENT_NAME, Moscow, Russia
Project Description:
Administration and support of mission critical production Oracle databases.
Responsibilities:
- Provided 24x7 support of Oracle production databases under Solaris and Linux environment;
- Installed Oracle database software;
- Applied Oracle patchsets and minipatches on production databases;
- Implemented High Availability solutions (Standby Database);
- Successfully migrated production database from RH Linux to Solaris environment;
- Developed and implemented of backup/recovery strategy using RMAN and Tivoli Data Protection;
- Identified several areas in customer's application that was causing performance degradation. Implementing my recommendations, customer was able to increase the performance of database by 2 times;
- Created enhanced Oracle performance tuning reports for customers's DBAs to prevent performance degradation in future;
- Resolved bugs with Oracle Support.
Environment:
Oracle-ы, ОСы, сервера, массивы

************** и еще пара крупных проджектов, подобных вышеописанным (кстати стоИт ли в моем случае примерной одинаковости проектов перечислять их всех или ограничиться 2-3?) **************

199x - 200x COMPANY_NAME, Moscow, Russia
Oracle DBA / Lead QA Engineer
Responsibilities:
- Provided Oracle, Sybase and MS SQL Server support for multiple databases in development and test environments for various types of databases - OLTP and Datawarehouse.
- Was responsible for Oracle, Sybase and MS SQL Server installations on UNIX (Solaris, Linux) and Windows servers.
- Performed DBA services, such as performance monitoring and tuning and daily database management.
Environment:
Oracle-ы, другие СУБД, ОСы, сервера, массивы

CERTIFICATION
- Oracle 9i Database Administrator Certified Professional (2005)

TRAINING
- ORACLE 10g: New Features For Administrators (2006);
- ORACLE 9i Performance Tuning (2004);
- ORACLE 9i Database Administration Fundamentals I&II (2004);

EDUCATION
Bachelor of Science Degree – Moscow Technical University - Moscow, Russia, 2000.

PERSONAL
- Highly skilled in troubleshooting, problem analysis and solving within tight deadlines;
- Good communication skills;
- Ability to work in team;
- Able to explain complex concepts and ideas to non-technical individuals;
- Passion for resolve difficult database challenges.

CITIZENSHIP
Russian Federation
Visa sponsorship required

REFERENCES
Available upon request

Ну это же только скиллзы. Далее в проектах нет упоминания о них кроме моей предыдущей работы сто лет назад. Честно говоря, не вижу ничего грешного в этом. Тем не менее, раз эта строчка у тебя вызывает такое неодобрение хотелось бы услышать мнения других опытных резюмеписателей. Вообще, будучи неоднократно из границей и звоня оттуда домой, +7 всегда прокатывало безо всяких 011. Спорное утверждение. Разве не лучше увидеть то что предстоят заморочки с визами уже после прочтения заслуг? Вообще-то весь этот пафос про успех компании слизан именно с западных DBAшных резюме. Про Principal Consultant - тоже самое - взято из западных резюме.
Насчет самому ставить, по моему у нас в любом интеграторе помимо умения трепать языком (я правильно понял, что консультант, на твой взгляд, именно болтун в первую очередь?) должен уметь делать кучу всего руками, иначе как заслужишь то чтобы тебя слушали заказчики? По моему обычно ты сначала зарабатываешь себе имя, работая руками, а потом уже имя работает на тебя. Нее, я не прав?
Про оверквот, мне сложно судить. Если я напишу просто Bachelor's Degree – Moscow Technical University - Moscow, Russia, 2000 так бужет нормально?
Название института можно считать и так не упомянуто (урезал как только смог).
Я писал, что опыт работы DBA 8 с лишним лет. А работаю я с 4 курса, т.е это еще 90-ые были. Что же тогда на твой взгляд неверно? Здесь я просто не понял ничего :))

Спасибо всем большое за ценные советы!
А как резюме по части кривизны в английском? Если отбросить big/large, много косяков осталось?

Если я напишу просто Project Experience - как по-вашему, нормально будет? Или все же лучше Significant Projects? Эээ... я не очень понял. Если я, положим, собираюсь в Германию, то как в конечном итоге должен выглядеть данный фрагмент?
Как-то так?
CITIZENSHIP
Russian Federation.
Working visa sponsorship required for Germany